As I said in class, I thought that the article about the storm was terribly disorganized. However, it is understandable how a story like this could be poorly structured. The storm affected such a large area that many disastrous events were bound to happen. With so much information at your disposal, its understandable that a story could be disorganized. I thought that photos perfectly showed how strong the storm was. No one expected it, and we hit everyone hard.
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