New York Times: Monday, September 19, 2011

Today's paper was painfully uninteresting.  I don't know what it was, i just couldn't become attached to any of the stories, not even the ones about Google or Facebook.  Now that we've been over the different kinds of leads extensively, I'm trying to figure how to order my paragraphs to make the information I gathered coherent and readable.  It's challenging to figure out how writers do it with the feature articles in the Times, considering how large their stories are.  However I feel like that's where I struggle the most right now, so from now on I'll be focusing on the order of the paragraphs when I read the times.